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Review:Akussa says:

Well this is a very strong chapter, moving the story forward and introducing the characters in such a great light! I really enjoyed reading this; once again, the descriptions and detailings, both in scenery uas well as in the emotional state of the character, was wonderfully done.

I really like your Teddy, he is definitly a great angsty teenager!! But in the end, you didn't go overboard with his angst, it felt real and heartfelt and not cliched or exagerated at all. I could really fell for him and I can definitly understand why he would steal that time turner. Harry was great, very canon like and acting just as I imagine he would, being a mature family man!

I really enjoy how the characters you are creating and the ambiance as well. I will certaintly keep my eyes pealed for your next update because I cannot wait to see how you will play this out for Teddy! Great work!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I'm very grateful to hear that you like my Teddy and don't think I overdid his angst, especially as I'm working on another project with another teenager about the same age who definitely has angst of her own (though her situation is very different from Teddy's). I realized writing that that since we all know what teen angst is like, something less is more in terms of description, so it doesn't go overboard, as unfortunately, READING about too much angst can get annoying. Equally glad to hear that you liked my adult Harry-honestly, I was surprised at how easy writing him came, but it was fun to write about a matured Harry and for Harry to have a chance to give Teddy the same type of advice he would have probably gotten from his father. Writing this has been easy so far, so an update will definitely be on the way sooner rather than later. :) Thanks again for your lovely reviews-they mean a lot, and I hope you continue to enjoy the story!

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