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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hello there!

Hold you're deathly glares right there! I know, I took ages to get this review across but things needed to be sorted out...y'know? Okay, maybe not.

Anyhoo, great chapter! I though it was written exceptionally well. I particularly like the way you the words were spread out evenly. It wasn't one of those with chunk after chunk of words that make it so hard for me to read or those ones that go a sentence per paragraph (seriously!)

You capture Teddy's character here very well. I like the bit how he wishes he had parents to fuss and what-nots all over him. Even having Harry Potter as your godfather does have its disadvantages. Also, I don't know why but Ginny came across as snobby to me here. You might want to fix that if you don't actually want that effect. She seems mean...but she's naturally scary any way.

Overall, love the chapter! Keep the story going! Me and my reviews *cough* even though they might come a little but late *cough* no matter what! 9/10

Gotta Dash,
CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: Hello!

No don't be silly, this review really isn't late- I'm still actually waiting for a review from the creator of the challenge and I asked her back in December!

I'm veryb obsessive over the layout of my chapters, they have to be spaced a certain way otherwise I get annoyed with myself so I'm glad you like it :)

I haven't actually written Ginny as an adult before so I wasn't really sure how to write her, I tried my best but I'll definitely take your words into consideration.

Thank you so much! I honestly adore your reviews even if you think they are 'late'. Thank you again!

x Ely

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