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Review:dobbys_socks says:
Hey, dobbys_socks here with your requested review.

Well, I liked it very much! I love how she was such a rebel - in a way - to her own house's characteristics and called herself a 'Weasley male'. I think you may have changed tenses a little throughout but I'm not an expert on that either. The only thing was that at the beginning when you said, 'You see, I hate mornings but I love breakfast. See the dilemma?', the second 'see' made it sound funny if you say it out loud. I'm thinking and I don't actually know what would go better (sorry) but you should probably change that.

I just have two questions. Can I please read the second chapter? I know you said you didn't want me to but it can't be that bad if this chapter is so good. Just checking in case it is a problem.

My second question is: what were the instructions of the challenge and is it still open? It looks very interesting...

Well done on another great story.
dobbys_socks

Author's Response: Thank you!
Aaah yes, I've had trouble with that see thing and I've tried changing it so many times but I couldn't figure anything out!

Yay, I'm glad you want to read the next chapter, but I will actually be posting a new one soon, which is compleeetely different to what it is now, so I don't want to confuse you. Plus it was kinda poorly written as well and moved waaay too fast. So I guess you could read it, but you might as well wait :P haha It will be in the queue in probably two weeks? Something like that :)

The challenge closed a while ago sorry! We were given a house and one of the seven deadly sins (I was given wrath and Hufflepuff; my title was so creative) and we had to show the sin with the character.

Thank you so much! :)


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