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Review:Akussa says:
Hi!

This is a very interesting idea! I love time-travel stories as well and after reading a LOT of those, I have to admit that for every good story, there is about 10 horrible ones.
Yours hasn't really begun yet but already, we can tell that it is original and has a definite twist to it. I really love the idea of Teddy going back to his parents and like you, I think that the entire next-gen group is a bit much and just takes over poor Teddy.

So far, I like your writting style a lot. The detailing is just enough to give us a good idea of the characters and background story without going overboard and drowing the storyline. I really like how you described Lisa Turpin. It is so rare that we see writters chosing this background for their characters. Having one that didn't fight and chose to protect herself is brilliant and is one of the reason that shows the potential this story has.

I can't wait to read the rest because this is a really good opening chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate it, and I'm so glad to hear that I'm not the only one who feels that away about Time Travel stories (or has a guilty pleasure for them!). I'm also glad you liked the story of Lisa Turpin. I honestly don't know where it came from; I wasn't going to go into much detail about her, but when I googled her to make sure I wasn't missing anything about her, I thought about how she wasn't part of the D.A. and it all came together from there. I'm actually planning to update tonight. Updates won't normally be so frequent, but I think my strange prologue scared people away, so I'm really eager to get to Teddy and his story. Hope you enjoy! :)

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