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Review:charlottetrips says:
This is my first Voldemort/Minerva story and for a one-shot, it was very well written. I'd personally have liked more on the backstory as the beginning of their love seemed abrupt. But once I let that go, I just immersed myself in the language.

I mean that we could tell everyone of our little slice of paradise but when we do people being the flawed humans they are would tear at our Paradise until there was nothing left This shows Voldemort coming out.

I didn't quite understand Minerva's willingness to hang onto him so much after they'd graduated but the twist with the marriage and why she called the meeting was interesting.

This line is so powerful to me: She used to tell me when she tucked me in that angels were watching over me. She was wrong. There was nothing protecting her. There's no higher power, there's no God. There's just chaos and violence, random unpredictable evil, that comes out of nowhere, rips you to shreds.

If you were to write more, I'd definitely be interested in reading it!

Author's Response: Yay! I love introducing people to new ship (whether they like them or not is another story haha)
I thought about adding backstory in but I thought that because it was a courtroom case that it would seem kind of pointless, but thank you!

Thank you! Yeah, it was a bit OOC but I guess it was because she was in love. People do crazy things when they are in love :)

That line, unfortunately, was not written by me (as much as I want it to be) it was written by the talented Supernatural writers :) but yes, it is one of the most powerful quotes that I think I've stumbled across in a long time.

Thank you for such an amazing review!

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