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Review:Moonyxluna says:
Hey, I'm from the Hufflepuff common room topic.

This was a really great first chapter. Marianna was a very easily relatable character, and I really enjoyed the inner dialogue she had throughout the story. The sudden "dissaperance" of a best friend due to a new relationship is hard on anyone, and it sounds like Marianna and her friend were attached at the hip.

I know this is kind of random, but I really like the "having a bad day" theme. It's different, from a lot of the stuff I read. Either it's something catostrophic like Voldemort, or it's a beautiful sunshiney day. This does a brilliant job showing how the little things add up.

Although if someone spilled fried eggs on my Harry Potter books, I'd have a smiliar reaction to Marianna's. Strike that, I'd be worse. :)

I liked the part about the Ravenclaw tower statue, how it gives you harder riddles if you're nice to it. It fits the character you gave her so perfectly that she'd want a challenge.

I'm interested to read more of this, and I'll be watching for updates. You've got a really great start here, to what I'm sure is going to be a excellent story.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm so glad that you enjoyed the chapter and thought that Marianna was realistic- I was really trying to make her real and it's fantastic to hear that it worked. I really did imagine Marianna and her friend to be "attached at the hip"- they spent all of their time together.

I'm glad that you liked the "having a bad day theme"- I've had too many of those days where things go from okay to awful in just a few moments. It happens to everyone.

Haha- yeah, I don't know exactly what I'd do if someone spilt food on my books but it wouldn't be pretty!

I'm glad that you liked the part with the Ravenclaw statue- typically it would be the opposite (easier riddles if you're kind) but that wouldn't fit the stereotype of Ravenclaws at all, now would it?

The next chapter is already in the queue! :)

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