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Review:Valerie Ann says:
And I am back :) I must say, I didn't see the whole Lysander thing coming AT ALL but I liked it, it really surprised me but it fit well into the story.

Can I just say, I really like David! He seems like such a sweetheart with a rough exterior and I'm excited to see where you're going with the development of his character. Another thing I didn't see coming? Ron Weasley's death. At first I thought I read the previous chapter wrong but your build up led right to it and it was just me who misunderstood.

I am waiting for when Hermione meets Andy. I'm not sure what is going on exactly, for all I know you could be building up for a twist that is going to completely throw me off, but he really does seem like Draco. I'm not even kidding now. All I want is for Hermione to fall in love and Annie and David to get together.

The book meshed a lot better this time. The only difference I noticed was Kate's description changed from black (raven) colored hair to golden locks. Other than that I can't think of any major discrepancies, but that one is honestly no big deal. I'm probably the only person who would ever notice something small like that.

You are both doing a lovely job. I can't wait for the next chapter (or book...)

Author's Response: Hey, I'm glad you've read it. I'm terribly sorry that it took quite long for you to have the chance to read this chapter (book). The staffs of this web is really piss me off for taking a looong time to validate this story. It's not once I wait for nearly two weeks until they validate it.

Amelia and I decided to have more of Lysander in this last few books. He's been a great friend of Annie and will be a great input for the story. And Kate (which really is blonde in my earlier notes but changed due to Amelia's wishes) will be such a waste if she's not dating Lysander. Admit it, who would waste a beautiful girl and a handsome guy? ;)

Yes, I know! David is such a sweet babe! I confess, he's the kind of guy I've been dreaming for this all time - since I'm currently single right now. You should meet Amelia's boyfriend. He's so much like David. She's so lucky to have him. Maybe someday, I'll have my own David.

And about Ron... I'll tell you this, I nearly punch Amelia in the face when she insisted to 'kill' Ron. I can't bare 'taking' Ron's life. He's too good to be dead. Him being dead is as worst as Fred being dead. Amelia is such a meanie-_- Oh, I think I'm just being hyperbolic. I hate to admit but Amelia and I is like yin and yang. She's so calm while I'm so emotional. Even if she sometimes acts a bit off, that's nothing compared to me. She's older only by three hours by I feel like she's older than me by three years. I'm such a kid.

You think so? I admit, the last two chapters will be interesting. You have to make sure that you read it. It's where all the best part is. I also agree that Hermione and Annie should get happiness in their lives. Their so kind.

By the way, Amelia told me that you've guessed who she is. I couldn't help but to agree with her, how did you do that? We thought that no one from tumblr would realise that she's Amelia. She's been pretending quite a lot that I almost believed that Amelia is someone else. You have to see how she acted like she's one of my readers and she can't wait to read the next chapter.

Well, I think that's all I have to say. I'm so happy for all the suggestions and nice-words. I hope that the story will be finished before Annie's birthday so we could celebrate it together.

Till next book,
Sophie (and Amelia)


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