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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
All right, it's OFFICIAL: I'm marrying your writing.

You have this way to creating these fantastic stories that bring not only Next Gen Hogwarts to life, but your characters as well. Each character is unique and multi-faceted. Your Fred is perfect and you still carry his voice over from And Capers Ensue. This line especially rang true for me and his slight obsession with Anjali: Fred had a weakness for the glamorous sort, stunning bombshells with better-than-perfect figures and legs a mile long.

I love being able to see him interact with James as his sidekick since we only really get glimpses here and there during And Capers Ensue of what their relationship was like. It's easy to see James as the mastermind but he still relies on his friends to help him, much like Bea relies on her friends too. Your stories are all about the friendships and ohmygod, it just makes me so happy, you know? It's hard to find stories that aren't angsty or about some sort of tragedy and here you are, writing these phenomenal humorous Next Gen stories that, to me, are like canon. Like I said, MARRYING YOUR WRITING. I'm serious, your characters are canon for me. True story.

I love Ellian and how she sort of tolerates James's craziness with a fondness only best friends can have. James's sudden realization that Ellian is a girl and he notices how pretty her eyes are, oh man, he is such a poor sap. He's falling in love with his bestie and he's all put out that a) Fred is better at flirting than him, and b) all these guys want to ask Ellian out.

I'm so excited to read the rest of this (when I'm not studying, of course) and I wish I could just read your writing forever and live with your Next Gen characters and enjoy Hogwarts as it's meant to be - a fun learning experience and making great friends with no threat of war or evil wizards.

Love this and you (in a totally non-creepy way).

Author's Response: asdfgk my writing accepts your proposal; it would like a wedding as soon as possible so we can all enjoy the cake reception.

Hee, that is the one line that is definitely very "Oh, Freddie" of the first chapter. I don't really get to show what he's like when Bea's not around in Capers yet. It was so fun writing this Fred that was a little younger and more relaxed.

James influenced Bea quite a bit, and it's been really interesting to write him especially because this oneshot has nothing to do with their escapades in Capers (since this was written first). But I still tried to incorporate how James held a group together like glue - he's the one with the ideas but also has the charisma to match so that he can convince everyone else to play along. AND OMG YES, FRIENDSHIP STORIES~ They are so few and far between sometimes ;_;

Ellian doesn't actually get expanded upon too much in this story (as it was primarily about James and nonsense when I first wrote it), but I've always had this novella plunny featuring her and James about their life from when they're 20-30 (and as a bonus, I'd get to write bits of the Capers cast older as well). It's /completely/ different and I probably won't have the time to write it after I'm done with Capers, but I really want to.

Thank you so so much :3 ♥ I can't believe my writing even comes anywhere /close/ to being anyone's headcanon but I am flailing madly here. I LOVE YOUUU in a totally creepy way.


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