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Review:magicmuggle01 says:
Hi here is your review in response to your appeal on the forums.

This has the makings of being an excellent. I felt sympathy for your main character right away and thought to myself I've been on the same boat.
You tell a great story, nice and clear and no messing around with stuff that really has no meaning. I could imagine everything as the story unfolded. And I always say that you have to grab the readers attention in the first chapter, or else you lose them, and I think you've succeeded in that respect.
I will be adding this to my favs so I can read more when you update. Well done and keep writing.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm so glad that you enjoyed the first chapter and that Marianna came across well. I really wanted to make her real for the readers.

I'm also pleased that you like the way I wrote it- I tried to ensure that the reader was aware of what was happening in the story and I'm glad that came across nicely.

Thanks for adding it to your favourites! The next chapter is already in the queue.

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