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Review:TheGoldenKneazle says:
hi there.

this was absolutely amazing. you have described Bella's descent into madness so perfectly, it feels as though we are becoming mad with her. you've characterised her so perfectly, and all her actions and words ring true to JK's Bellatrix, and i just adore this.

i thought that you characterised everyone else really well too - Lucius with his one mistake, and how he is forced to tell his wife about Bella; the dementors and her thoughts of hiw she will stay for the Dark Lord; Draco, and how painful it was for her in so many ways.

also, i love how you've made it that Draco was hurting her, but she is so good at inflicting pain on others. her madness, her love of pain, was written so well! and your last line was painfully sad, too. i've loved all of this.

~TGK

Author's Response: Yay! I'm staying true to character while still making it not completely canon! Thank you so much for these wonderful words! I'm just going to hug them to me while I finish my laundry :)

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