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Review:Ashling586 says:
I am a bit confused about the first part of the chapter. I have no clue who was speaking or what it was about. Though I will admit that I loved the imagery that was used in the dream scene. I am pretty sure that it wasn't Rette speaking during the dream scene since the speaker talked about being in love with a girl.
The second part, was nice. I could feel the awkwardness during the sex talk part. Which is nice because that shows how well you are able to get your readers to connect to the story. The train scene was cool. In the end I am left with the feeling that James might have a thing for Amorette, and that she might be getting some feelings back, though she doesn't realize it yet.
Overall nice job.

Author's Response: Yes, the first part of the chapter was a snippet from the italics in the 2nd chapter. Don't worry no one has a clue what's going on with the italics and I suppose it'll stay that way for a while :D, no it's not Rette's PoV (: I'm glad you could connect to the sex talk part, my mum's never bothered to have one so it was just what I thought one would be like, with your dad nonetheless (: I'm glad you could see the hints James was giving and I'm glad you liked the scene!
Thanks heaps, it's really appreciated :D


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