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Review:charlottetrips says:
Hi there! Char here with your Requested Review and from the Tag Thread (hope you don’t mind, killing two birds with one stone) *no birds were actually injured or killed with that statement*

Just because it was the first thing I saw: “particpate" – “participate”
(Added once done reading the whole thing: And because I didn’t want to put this as the last thing you see now that I’ve written the whole thing – there was some spacing issues on the paragraphs.)

Second thing I’ve seen: your graphics! I love the soulful looking individual on your banner and then the chapter image is simply beautiful with the gold and white…excuse me while I stare at it for a moment.

…and we’re back!

Oh, your opening paragraphs are so sweet and very nicely descriptive. It really does set the moment and the tone of the whole thing. Imaging little Severus drawing Lily and him stick figures just makes me want to smoosh him. And then you go on to describe the pitiful Christmas he’s set to have!! Oh Sevvy!

LionsRule! This whole thing! Why don’t you just take my heart and wring it until it’s got nothing left? Just the whole thing made me want to go and blow all my money on little boy presents so I could throw it at my computer in hopes that little Sevvy would get them. The way you write him at this point in time captures how young innocence starts gaining the color of bitterness yet maintains a warm corner, all because of one Lily Evans. Very nicely done.

Author's Response: Hi! No, of course I don't mind you combining this with the review tag ^_^ Thanks for the catch, I'll keep that in mind the next time I submit this. And thanks for the graphics compliment- although the credit for those goes to Coco786 and Carnal Spiral over at TDA. I'm really happy that you liked this story, and thanks SO much for taking the time to review!

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