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Review:StarryLaura says:
I think I just died. :') This chapter was flawless. No doubt about it. And just a warning, but this is going to be a really long review. Just because I love this chapter so much.

The wolf and rabbit metaphor was really beautiful. Both their interpretations of it. I can see how Draco's convincing himself that he's not a monster, but Hermione sees the wolf as vicious no matter what...No wonder Draco's afraid to confide in her...

The snowflake constellations? Beautiful. And when Hermione asked him about naming his children after them...ASDFGHJKL. My heart. And his offering for her to curse him... D: Why is he so perfect.

The confession about his sad eyes... :') No words. Both their confessions about wanting to fall in love...that was...so perfect. I can't even talk correctly right now...cardboard boxes...things you can't control...hope...safe, protected, important, wanted, loved.

I have so many favorite quotes here, you don't even know. :') The feeling of love is so prevalent in this chapter...

I loved the part where Draco debated whether or not to take her hand...how that tiny physical movement became the decision of whether or not to risk becoming the unconditional love Hermione spoke of, or to play it safe and not tell her about his mission, live a life with no hope. :'(

Her question and him grabbing her scarf...Let me die right here. His statement that he would rather die the last Malfoy than to repulse her was so...I am rendered speechless. No words in this language can convey what I'm feeling right now. Him confessing that Hermione's presence was his light. His longing for the child of theirs. :') Wondering why there was anything wrong with loving her.

And last of all, her vault. That riddle was flawless. The way only he could have thought of the answer so quickly, and her question for love...how she was the only one who actually cared enough to ask for love. I can't wait until we see Draco's vault.

And Ron... D: What if this exposes Draco? UPDATE SOON. Your new chapter has caused me to reach an inch from death in anticipation and love and all the good Dramione stuff.

Author's Response: StarryLaura,
Wow! I'm sorry that it is taking so long to respond to your review. It is because I died when I read it! And I keep dying everytime I read it over and over again!

You give such wonderful reviews that render me speechless. I'm so elated that you like so much of it... the quotes, the snowy constellations, wolves and rabbits, and what they talked about. There really was a lot put into this chapter... talk of hope and love and cardboard boxes and if he would name his children after the stars. Awe...

And I love that you mentioned her question. It was a question that went unanswered.

I think, in this chapter Draco became more in-character than in others... a bit elusive and mysterious and definitely deep, deep, deep and sincere.

He grabbed that scarf and reeled her in because he wants to be close to her. He wants to feel her next to him, but is holding back. ;(

They will come together soon, but Draco has some loose ends to tie up first at the Art Gala.

You liked her riddle? Yeah! She stills harbors pain... hurt just doesn't go away so quickly and she wonders if a heart that is taught to hate is capable of love. And if it is... would he let her in, a Mudblood? ;(

Oh, StarryLaura... Thank you so very much for your wonderful review. Words cannot describe how I feel in reading your words.

You show me excitement for my story, which means the world to me. It makes every hour I work on it 'worth it.'

Bless your sweet heart for every encouraging word.

The next chapter is in queue, but I'm editing it today, which will send it to the back of course. But know that it will be up soon! Yeah!

THANK YOU!
Love and hugs to you,
Dark Whisper

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