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Review:HoneyDukesKid says:
Woah! So trippy! I like it. I get the feeling the Eleanor is a bit of a goody-two-shoes which makes all of these goings-on really interesting. I want to know more about why she's doing this and what she thinks about You-Know-Who and exactly what Sirius did and how the story's going to play out. Which means you've got me hooked. I usually don't like not knowing what's going on, but you've written this so well (and it was short so it's not like I'm tired out after a long attempt at trying to get my bearings) that I'll be reading more.

Really, wonderful job! Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much! I don't usually get non-requested reviews, especially from people i don't know well so waking up this morning and seeing this here really made my day!

I suppose I can see how she might be interpreted as a goody-two-shoes type girl. It's interesting for me to see how people view my character and see things that I didn't even see myself, or i may not have thought to think of her as such but there are definite parts of her that are like that. Characters have a weird way of fleshing themselves out.

I'm so pleased that you've enjoyed this first chapter and i do hope you continue on reading on. I've had a couple readers mention that it was just too ambiguous to really like so i'm glad that it does make sense, or least, pulls you into it ;D Thanks for the review :D

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