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Review:HP fly on the wall says:
Huh. Good chapter!!! It's really interesting how Remus, Sirius, Lily, and Snape are all working together.not exactly the dream team lol:) But huh. In this story Bellatrix seems to be smarter than we givve her credit for. At first when Lily started crying, i thought it was because the narration said that they were laughing like mauruders, and maybe it reminded her that James wasn't there or something. Very interesting."Maybe he just wants to be friends" LMFAO ahh poor with Bellatrix on this one why would anyone want to be her friend?? Haha well good chapter.keep writing.

Author's Response: thanks! Yes, they have a VERY different dynamic than the golden trio, and have a lot more to overcome. Lily is very fragile, of course, and she's definitely reminded of James when she sees Sirius and Remus together, like the good old days. I'm always a little unsure with Bella, but since she always suspected Snape, I thought she should be the one to make things tricky. Trickier, rather. And portraying her in her own home with her husband was definitely a challenge, so I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review!

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