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Review:Hippothestrowl says:
Excellent and a good place to finish. I always thought it immensely poignant in the book and even more in the movie when their memories are wiped - almost like Hermione's dead only worse.

Nicely fits the prompt theme and we get a good insight into Mrs. Granger's thinking. It helps a lot that the story is anchored in a character we all know well - Hermione. It's also intriguing in that it makes us think just how much Hermione would want to tell her muggle parents. I never thought about that before.

A minor technical flaw that broke my immersion was when McGonagall was at the door. To see 'an older witch' implies Mrs. Granger is familiar with witches and the magical world (plus older than who? - elderly or old witch is better.) Much more correct would have been eg, a strange old woman dressed like a fairytale witch.

Good story from another viewpoint. Enjoyable.

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