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Review:Serendipity1234 says:
I love this story so much :)
There's so much drama!! Though Eva is getting on my nerves a bit...I mean what was that about MY Lorcan?! I seriously hope she means that in a completely platonic way. I mean, honestly, I don't see any polygamy in her future. And she obviously loves Anders. And she wasn't jealous of 'Lorly.' so I'm guessing that she just wants Lorcan and Lily to be in real, honest, loving relationships that will last.
And Lily/Mason is absolutely adorable. I love how she's in denial and yet he trails after her like a lovesick puppy :D
I just wish there was more about the Eva/Anders chemistry. I feel like we don't see as much of it as we did with even Lorcan. I suppose that. Luke be partly due to the fact that they haven't had any alone time in forever. But I really want to see more organic and tactile imagery surrounding their relationship. And maybe some more of her thoughts centering on him? Because that would happen, right? I guess I'm not really sure about that last part since there's so much drama going on with her friends and her upcoming graduation and whatnot, but I think it would be cute.
I can't wait to see more of this Mason thing :) I love the guy. He's sweet and ridiculous. A lovely combination.
And I'm admittedly hoping that Lorcan will get a new girl soon...I feel bad for him constantly pining over Eva.

Please update soon :)

Author's Response: Eee, another one of your reviews! I adore Lily/Mason. Lison? Maly? I can't wait to get the next few chapters up, since there are some really great moments for the two of them coming up. We've got a few chapters to go first but... They're great! Mason and Lily are just going to get better and better from here on out.
Well, Christmas is coming again, and it's quite possible that Eva will be going home with a certain male someone. And Chapter 29 just might be told from his point of view... Gah, it's getting hard not to say anything too big about what's to come, since I do know. I've got two more chapters to write before WBP hits 40, and reaches the end of the line! Although to be honest, I've been avoiding doing that. I'm going to need tea, chocolate, and blankets to get me through those final chapters.

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