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Review:CambAngst says:
OK, so forget my suggestion about elaborating on the contents of the Muggle Studies class in my review of the last chapter. Alecto's lecture was pretty much what I expected. It might have been nice to throw in a few more gritty details, just for the shock value, but overall I think you captured it.

Poor Hermione. It's great to see McGonagall trying as hard as she can to protect her, but she really is in quite a fix, isn't she? I realize this would ruin the entire notion of the story, but I just want so badly for her to run away and track down Ron and Harry. I'm a sucker for canon that way, I suppose.

The scene at Dumbledore's tomb was a touching reminder of how the war began in earnest.

Author's Response: Hi!
The Muggle Studies class being mentioned in DH was always something that interested me, so I wanted to make sure I gave it some attention as I always wondered how awful they could have possibly made them, aside from obviously turning them into brainwashing sessions. When I actually started writing this I set out to write it as a 12+ so I didn't want the gritty detail, but now that it's M I think I probably could use some more, considering it probably needs that shock value.

Hahaha I think we all want her to run after them, but she can't it just won't work if she does. Plus I don't see her as someone who runs from a challenge, so her running away might be a little OOC for this Hermione, she's been strong this long, she can manage a little longer. :) *cough many chapters*

I really wanted something to gently remind the reader about the war, it's easy to forget that it had to start somewhere, so that's why that part exists.

Thanks again for all your wonderful reviews!

~ Ash

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