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Review:CambAngst says:
This chapter was really inspiring. I felt uplifting to read Hermione finding her courage and taking control of the situation in spite of the darkness swirling around her.

Your writing was much, much better than the prior chapter. I didn't notice any glaring spelling or grammar mistakes. In turn, that made the chapter much easier and more pleasant to read.

Poor Ginny. She was obviously an easy target for the dementors, considering how worried she is about Ron and Harry. I hope she comes back stronger.

Draco felt much more in character in this chapter. He wasn't hostile, but he wasn't warming right up to her, either. Much like you'd expect him to be in public. You also tackled the issue of why he was alone on the train, which I liked.

Keep up the good writing!

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