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Review:CambAngst says:
I really enjoyed the emotions of this chapter. Especially at the end, you did a terrific job of making the reader feel the sadness and isolation that Draco and Hermione shared.

When Draco admits that he wishes things were different, I did find that to be a little out of character, compared to how you've portrayed him up to this point. It just felt a bit too soon for him to be opening up to Hermione quite that much. Not so long before, he was insulting her, calling her mudblood, telling her that "her kind" didn't belong. I felt like it should have taken a bit longer for him to warm up to her.

His explanation of the Carrows was appropriately chilling. Everything sounded perfectly in context.

Your grammar in this chapter was a bit rough. The paragraph that begins with "I'd never sat in complete silence on the way to Hogwarts before" seemed particularly in need of attention.

So far, I'm enjoying your story, even though Dramione's aren't usually my cup of tea.

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