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Review:sanni says:
I don't actually know whether you (and other storytellers) read/receive reviews for completed stories, of if they help at all, but I don't think couraging and constructive critisism never hurt too much :)

There are two minor spelling mistakes in this text that for some reason bother me. The word "bare" is mentioned in the scene in the desert by the lake, but it's probably unintentionally spellt "bear". The other one is about the word "hell", which comes up quite a few times in this and the following chapter. I would not write it with a capital letter, but perhaps it is a matter of style :)

I'm dreading to finish this novel but at the same time I don't want it to end!

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