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Review:CambAngst says:
So I was immediately intrigued by the notion of Hermione returning to finish her seventh year, leaving Ron and Harry to their own devices. For Hermione, I think you covered the most important issues she was likely to face: her parents' safety, her relative isolation from the rest of the magical world, and the specter of the Muggle-born Registration Committee. I'm eager to see how you handle that last one.

Your portrayal of her obliviating her parents was touching. Very easy to visualize and feel the emotions. Then her introspection at the train station and on the train seemed perfectly in character.

I was a little curious how Malfoy came to be by himself, rather than surrounded by his usual gang of cronies. I suppose it will become more clear as the story progresses.

All in all, this was a good first chapter. It definitely leaves me wanting to read more.

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