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Review:TheGoldenKneazle says:
Hi there *team blue*!

This is so beautiful, and so heart-breakingly sad. I love how you've ordered it to show memories against the present, and how Remus has a different drink for every person he loved in his life. It's so sad, and the way that he is constantly fighting for order in his mess of a life - I just love it.

I though you characterised everyone so well in this. In Remus' memories, we got a snapshot of everyone, and it was enough to show us what his relationship had been with them. And I love the subtlety of his and Sirius' relationship too - it was quiet and unsure, and out of Remus' control, so he didn't know how he felt about it.

Your ending scene was just brilliant, because it gave us some closure over what Remus had gone through all those years, but there wasn't a proper we. Your repetition of the Sirius/Remus 'we' was just amazing, and I loved this so much! 10/10!

~Lottie

Author's Response: Thank you so much! E.

I've missed writing the Marauders, I can tell you that. I might just go on a Marauder-writing explosion type thing. It'll be really fun and exciting. Yeah.

As being a completely new person to slash, I didn't think I could pull off anything more than this very very subtle relationship - but it was like super fun. So I'm really glad you liked it! Thank you oh so very very much.

(and I'm still not a stalker xD)

-AC


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