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Review:Elenia says:
Elenia here from the Gryffie review tag (:

I must say, an excellent first chapter! You really managed to capture the readers interest with this one. I'm actually dying to click the 'next chapter'-button to see what happens next, but I have to give you my review first (:

You described everything very well, the feelings and the situations. I felt really sad for Jayde and wanted somebody to rush to her rescue. But I guess it made her stronger and she finally managed to defend herself, so that's a good thing!

Everything else about this chapter was perfect too. The flow, grammar and all the rest. So now I'm going to submit the review and continue reading my new fav. story (: I'll give you another review when I'm done!

Author's Response: Hi there Elenia! Thanks a billion for taking the time to read and review this!!

Hehe, I'm really glad that you think the first chapter is so interest-grabbing that you want to keep reading. :-)

I really appreciate your comments about the description, that's one of the things I've been worried about with my writing. And yes, everything did make her stronger!

I owe the flow and grammar praise to my wonderful beta/twin Jane (TenthWeasleyWriter); I couldn't have done any of that without her and I'm learning a lot.

Haha, I really hope you enjoy the next chapter, and that it continues to be your new fav. story. :-) Thanks again!

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