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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
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This was a very strong introduction to this story and to Jayde's character. It felt a little bit like Tom Riddle's background, except that she was sympathetic and not evil of course.

So many kids have to go through horrible bullying at school, and I think you portrayed that very well, and we could really relate to her emotions.

The flow, grammar, and structure were all really good, and the ending was a great suspense building cliffhanger.

Author's Response: Hey there! Thank you SO much for taking the time to read and review this for me! And for leaving such a kind and thoughtful review!

I agree that Jayde's background is a bit like Tom's, and I tried to include as much of a difference as possible (like her sympathy) to make it different.

I'm really glad you think I portrayed the school scene realistically, and that you felt you can relate to those emotions. And I'm glad the suspense I tried to insert paid off. :-)

Thanks again, dear!


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