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Review:Serendipity1234 says: about Lorcan/Lily? She can finally get a real boyfriend! Plus they're always arguing, so there could be chemistry there. And then, of course, Anders/Eva, because they're adorable together and she obviously loves him. And Helene/Louis, perhaps? He's a Weasley without a girlfriend so she could still fit into the mix. And you could do a spin-off with that pair! Because you're awesome with companion stories :)
And Helene is cool, but Anders should be with Eva. She's depressed is she obviously misses Anders and would rather be with him...
I love Lorcan, but I've definitely committed to team Anders. :)
Which may lose, judging by how things are going...
But I don't care. What's interesting about this story is that you make it really hard to choose which twin would be better for Eva by making them both adorable and by making Eva completely unaware of her own feelings. We figure out most of her feelings from her friends, even though it's told in first person. Of in dialogue rather than thoughts. It's unusual, but I like it.

Author's Response: You might be rather happy with the latest chapter of WBP then. I think it's 27?
Helene and Louis? Oh wow. You keep coming up with all these ships I've never even considered! Louis is around 3-4 years older than Helene though, and that would interfere with the possible future plans I have for him. Maybe I could change them. Louis with a girlfriend would be entertaining.
Yay! I was really aiming when I started this story to try and keep the twins on an even playing field, you know? My personal preference has probably shown through some of the review responses I've left people, but for the most part I don't think it's colored the events of the story, at least not in the long run.

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