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Review:Amie says:
I'm baccck!!! Haha, anywho, I love that you switched to Lily's point of view during this chapter. It makes me happy to see that she's not quite as annoying as she was in some of your other stories. And I personally hope that she falls in love with someone who is a bit "off the mark" of the usual man, so that she can grow as a character. Because I would love to see a Lorcan type of character appear in this story so that Lily can fall in love, and become a wee bit more like her mother. Maybe. Dreaming is allowed, right?

Also, I'm really hoping that for the next chapter, there is more of Albus. Oh goodness, there are so many digressions possible in this story. Albus, Lily, Ginny and Harry, Mione and Ron, Hugo(is he in the country??), and all of the other cousins... Please continue writing!!! :)

Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad that you're back for the third chapter, and even more glad that you liked Lily in it. I had to show things from her perspective, if only so that readers could see her at a distance from Rose's overpowering POV. I'm still trying to decide who to pair Lily with, but I do very much like your idea of finding her someone out of the ordinary who will bring her out more. Dreaming is definitely allowed, haha, though it may not turn out to be a dream. :P I really like your idea!

Albus will definitely appear more - perhaps not in the next chapter, but in the one after that. I have a big scene planned for him. *evil grin* He's a strange character in this, someone like Lily in his apparently superficial attitude, but who knows what he's hiding behind all of those clothes? ;) So many digressions, so hard to decide which ones to use! This story is way too much fun to write. :D

Thank you again for reading and reviewing! ^_^

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