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Review:Amie says:
I'm not really sure how Lily turned out to be so shallow, what with Ginny being so independent and free and Harry being a war hero. But I imagine that Lily's life went something like, "Daddy, can I have this?" and Harry would be a push-over to his one and only daughter. Especially with James and Albus being men and apparently inheriting other portions of Ginny and Harry's personalities. When Lily came around, I should think there would not be much left of the good qualities...

Ok, enough about Lily, but Rose and Scorpius's personalities... How Rose is so judgmental at first sight(may I say, hello Elizabeth Bennet?!?!), and Scorpius has the air of royalty about him, although still being a gentleman at all costs.
I am rather curious why Scorpius was there in the first place, however. Maybe in a future chapter you could be so kind to explain it?(oh goodness, I'm talking like the era.)

Goodness, such a long review. But I do love the story. :)

Author's Response: Long reviews are lovely! Thank you for taking the time to leave them! ^_^

Lily is rather shallow, but primarily in comparison to Rose - she knows what her place in the world is and how she, as a woman, can succeed in this kind of society, whereas Rose refuses to partake in that lifestyle. You are right in that Lily is the spoiled daughter of a powerful wizard, so she would have received everything she wanted, but she's also still young, naive, and just very feminine. :P I know a good few people like her in real life, so it's always amusing to hear reviewers wonder over her character.

I do have an explanation for Scorpius's presence, but for some reason, I forgot to include it in the chapter! Oh dear. I will include it the next time that he and Rose meets - perhaps she'll ask him or someone else will mention it conveniently. Sorry about that!

Anyway, thank you again for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it! :D

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