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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hey there!

Ooh. Flashy banner! I like it, nicely done! :)

Okay first of all, I just want to point out that there was a lot of tautology going on in the first paragraph and other awkward phrases in the story but I thought they were minor errors and they could just be left alone unless you want to edit.

Your description was really good, making sure that it paints out a good image in the reader's mind. I like the fact that you didn't dilly-dally around when it came to introducing the story and just decided to go for it. Great job!

The plot is really odd. I mean, Seamus and Draco hugging each other is just a shocker. Really interesting thing going on! I'd like to know what all this manly affection is about! Hahha.

Any who, I thought you really did a great job! 10/10 Keep up the good job! :D

Ta-ta for now,
CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: So I was going back through some of the CC reviews left on this story the other day and I didn't even realise that I hadn't answered this one - I felt so bad, and then what'd I do? I forgot to answer you again!

I am sorry, but I will answer you now :)

I'm going to be honest :P I actually had to look up the word tautology to find out what it meant :P but now that I know, I understand :D I am about to edit the first part of this story all over again, with a lot of changes to chapter 2 etc. and edit this one as well, so the majority of the grammar errors will be gone ^_^

Seamus and Draco are actually vitual parts to the plan :) so keep reading to find out why ;) hehe.

~Karni, x

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