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Review:LionsRule says:
Hi there! Here for the review tag thread ^_^

This was a really sweet idea. I love you made the moment after such a chaotic scene in Harry Potter so lighthearted, which is exactly how I think Bill and Fleur would have handled it. You captured their personalities really well, and their banter was really sweet. This piece made me smile in the end :)

One thing I would suggest is getting a beta for this. There were quite a few spelling/grammar errors that can distract from the story, so it would make it even better if you get those polished up :)

Overall, I'm glad I read this! It was a really sweet story, keep up the amazing work! ^_^

Author's Response: Yay for the review tag!

Thank you! I always shipped Bill/Fluer; I loved the innocence of their relationship and I tried to put that across. Thank you!

Yeah, I wrote this story a while back and my grammar was great so I'll go over and edit it one day; I'll also get one of my beta's to read it :D

Thanks again :)

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