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Review:SilentConfession says:
Hello Ac-rules i'm here for your request!!

wow, that is all i can say, this is such beautiful work, i almost have no words for this. Gosh, just so beautiful i could squee about this all night. i have never read a Sirius/Remus before and i loved how you've written their relationship so subtly. The repetitive use of that 'we' and how that disitinguished their relationship and even the coffee and tea and how he used each one to grieve different people in his life.

I loved the ending bit, you could literally feel the life these two men lost because of what happened. Somehow so much meaning was infused in that short scene with them sitting opposite of each other and Sirius just saying "forget it". I'm not sure why i grabbed onto that, but i guess there are just some things in life that you just can't explain and there are just no words for. Loosing 13 years of friendship/ something more might be one of them, but i could feel the hurt that was rippling off these two men.

That must have hurt Remus so much to have his best mates not there for him at his changing, he's had that for so long and suddenly there isn't anyone there and he's back to feeling like some unloveable monster.

I adored the style of this and the structure of how it switches between the past and present. The part where he's alone for christmas was brilliantly well done. The contrast between his depression and anger was in such contrast to Frank and Alice's bright christmas, but it made me feel sad knowing that their time too was soon to be over.

When you were talking about how Remus hoped that Sirius was brought by something or he hoped he was brought by something, did you mean bought perhaps?

I've been going back through this wanting to highlight the things i loved the most but i feel like i'm just highlighting the whole thing. I find no fault with this and i'm adding it to be favourites. Such a lovely piece of work.

Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks very much for finding the time to come and review this for me - I really appreciate it :)

I've never written a Sirius/Remus or anything that has slash in before, hence how it ended up so subtle you hve to squint - but I really really enjoyed writing it.

Eee! The ending bit was such a whim for me, but I guess I'm glad I included it then. I just think, awwhh, Remus and Sirius just had it all so bad. Its so sssaad.

Being a bit of a Marauders fan anyway it was a great excuse to come back and write a bit more of them. Ooops, yep that should be bought - goes back to edit that immediately - and THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU.

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-AC


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