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Review:manno_malfoy says:
I loved this! Loved it, loved it, loved it! Mostly because I can relate to the bickering and the chasing between the sisters. And how Narcissa, though the youngest, was keen on keeping her sisters from arguing... It's pretty much my life.

Anyway! I was really entertained by the family feel you've given to this one-shot. Because, personally, when I think of the Black family, I think of strict Purebloods, excommunicated rebels, and future Death Eaters. So I really liked how you've portrayed their childhood, and showed how much of a normal family they could be.

I also liked Bella's characterization, and how, when bored, she bothered people. You could actually see this young Bella grow into Bellatrix Lestrange, Voldemort's right-hand 'man', who kills and tortures for fun. Even if here she's just an innocent, little child.

I think I'm going to continue on with the next few chapters now! I'll probably be able to form a more constructive review by the end of the last chapter you have published.

(Oh, and this was for the Review War as well!)

Author's Response: Thanks! Me too - I have two younger sisters, lol. Oh man, does that make me Bellatrix? O.o Yeah, I always thought Narcissa seemed to hate confrontations - she always seems desperate to avoid them in the books, you know?
I really hate the overdone idea that all purebloods have horrible families, parents, etc. and wanted to do something different - hence I characterised Cygnus and Druella like that.
Thanks! There will be more memories later on showing bits of her development (I think). It was hard, though, to get her to act and think like a child yet to have the potential for doing everything she does later. Tricky.
Seriously? Wow, thanks! :D

Thanks for the lovely review!
Aph xx

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