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Review:Aphoride says:
Haha, lol! That was brilliant! I really liked more interaction with the Marauders and more Marlene. She is completely insane - but it's so fun to read! Flow and everything was perfect. I liked the notice about injections - will they turn up later? Hm... I can imagine one of the girls (and probably Sirius or James :D) fainting from having an injection. Also, the prank was so original. Most people do things with fireworks and spells and suchlike things, so it was nice to see a more muggle-style, untraceable prank for once. Poor Flitwick, though...
The one thing I would say is that Hogwarts has a uniform. I am, unfortunately, one of those rather irritating people who has an obsession with people remembering that. It's not a big thing, but I really noticed (because I'm mad about these things!).
Really, really enjoyed it!

Aph xx

Author's Response: Hehe! Very happy you enjoyed it :D Well I wouldn't actually have put anything about injections in, but I'd had one that day and I HATE them! So yeah...I wanted to make my characters suffer xD
Yeah, i wanted a different prank to right. Plus that had happened to me today :)

Uh oh! The uniform! New I'd forgotten something! I suppose i'll be able to slap something in about 'to wear under her robes' .

Thank youuu xx

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