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Review:manno_malfoy says:
I'm not one for fluff, but I was surely amused by this little one-shot. I just loved the description of the flat! You talk about it as though you've been there! And your portrayal of wife-y Hermione was rather one that I liked. Yes, she may have been a little different from the adamant, perfection-loving married Hermione I have in my head, but that did not make me like the character any less. You've had her attitude consistent throughout the story, and that was great!

I also have to admire the angle you have taken here. I can actually see Hermione and Ron living in a small flat, as opposed to the big polished places they usually are said to have because they are Ron and Hermione Weasley, war heroes and Harry Potter's best friends. So this was a refreshing piece for me to read.

And the ending was quite cute, and quite canon as well! Ron and his food! Speaking of Ron, he was epic in this one-shot! I particularly liked this line:

ďYouíre writing a reformation law, a law that could change relationships between the ministry and, erm, creatures, in the bloody kitchen. Or is it the sitting room? I canít really tell. And me? Iím eating dinner in your office.Ē

So yeah... great job! I plan (read as: cannot wait to get the time) to read more of your stories!

Author's Response: Well, I'm certainly glad you enjoyed this despite your general dislike for fluff. I've never lived in a flat, actually, but when I write I have to see the scenes in my head. I've not read much Ronmione. They are my favorite ship, and am always afraid to break the headcanon I've developed for them.

Thank yo so much for your review.


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