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Review:Cirque Du Freak says:
I have a feeling this is going to be fabulous. :D

A few things I'd just like to point out would be capitalization of Quidditch, Quaffle, Keeper - just keep that in mind. :) Also a beta would be very helpful as well just to help you iron out all those little things to make this even better than it already is!

I really liked this so far and you've already established Lysander's personality so well in this and you've created that line of difference between the twins and I'm GLAD you did because I always read stories where they're just a bit weird and exactly the same and its really annoyed me, because they have so much potential!

Anyway I can't wait to see what you do with this!

Cirque xxx

Author's Response: Wow! Well thank you for this. I was really nervous that Lysanders personality would be too wierd for some people but i'm really glad you liked it. I do plan on getting a beta but i have to have a first chapter up before finding a beta for it. Thank you for the wonderful review and suggestions.

~Slytherinchica08~


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