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Review:CynicalDragon says:
Ooh this is great! Riley is fanastic. Her relationships with the Weasleys are pretty realistically done and don't feel forced. I like your Lily, it's a different take on her. The dynamic you've set up between Riley and Hugo is wonderful, throwing food one second then talking (almost) civilly the next and then right back to throwing food.

I'm very curious about her family though. They are absolutely horrible, but very intriguing. It's a shame they're too proper to get into a good Weasley family food fight. I can't wait to find out what happend to her mother, my guess is leaning towards death. I can't imagine Riley choosing or being forced to live with the evil ones after a divorce, especially when her mother was awesome enough to be friends with Ginny and Hermione.

Oh and how old is Sutton? If it was in the chapter I must have missed it. It seemed like she was younger than Riley by a year or so, but I'm not sure.

Author's Response: Thanks! This is actually my first story where the main character isn't tight with a majority of the Weasleys which I kind of like, but it's definitely different! I like my Lily too. She's corky and weird which is also a new kind of best friend in my stories. I'm really excited to develop Hugo and Riley's relationship later on.

Her family is awful. I can't stand them. They are somehow extremely fun to write though. Especially Char. And even though Sutton and Char sometimes feel more horrible, I feel like her dad is the number one offender cause he's actually related to her. You'll find out later what happen to her mom! I'm not giving anything away now! ;D

Sutton is a year younger than Riley!


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