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Review:EvannaBlackthorn says:
I think your writing is quite good but I would have liked to see some more physical descriptions on the characters especially the ones we don't know like Alice and Mary. And sometimes I think the scenes changed a little too abruptly which is confusing for the reader. However I loved the humour throughout the chapter. I also like how despite the fact she's an orphan, Marlene seems to have a bright, cheerful personality and that makes her POV nice to read. Overall I enjoyed this chapter very much and I'd like to read more of this story. :D

Author's Response: Hiya! Thank you so much for a lovely review. Hmm...yes, I'll see if I can include some more descriptions in when i edit. And I'm planning on putting the **'s in between scene changes when I have time! Thanks so much.

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