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Review:Aphoride says:
I really, really love Marlene's character. I love how, even though she's an orphan, you made it uncliche - really, really good! The Marauders, Lily and the others are all well characterised too - they're easily recognisable as the people we know from canon. Marlene's personality makes me laugh, btw, she's just so random and insane. Also, I like how you made her friends with the Marauders without suggesting that she's 'the fifth Marauder' or anything like that. Kudos to you!
If there was one thing to be wary of, I'd say your scene changes. While it wasn't difficult to follow, it was just a bit sudden every now and then without anything to show there was a change in time, you know? Maybe something to think about!
Literally, though, that was the only thing. I really enjoyed it!

Aph xx

Author's Response: Thanks so much for a LOVELY review! I did try very hard to un cliche it all, and reviews are all suggesting I succeeded *squee* !

Thanks for your advice on the scene changes. I think I'll edit and put in **'s or something xD

LWG xx

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