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Review:classicblack says:
Hello, it's classicblack with your last review!
I have to say, this story was chock full of cliches, but that's what made it sweet and a pleasure to read.
I like the scene of Scorpius throwing rocks at Rose's window and that Ron and Hermione were watching them.
The ending, by the way, was beautiful. Really, I thought it was perfectly done. Those last lines: "That's all they needed. That's all they ever needed." were wonderful.
It was confusing sometimes because occassionally you switched from third person POV to first person POV and back again.
I think, as I said before, all this story really needs is some editing.
It's been a pleasure reading a reviewing.
Happy writing,
classicblack from the forums

Author's Response: Okay, so let me just say, this was my absolute favourite chapter to write :) I know the POV are funky... I am actually in the process of just going back and editing so thank you for all your help! :)

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