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Review:classicblack says:
I'm back with your review!
I'm just going to come right out and say it: awww, poor Scorpius. He was so close to telling Rose how he felt and then she went and told him she was dating someone else!
A bit of confusion: how old are they now? Because obviously some years have passed. Sometimes things are a bit unclear in the chapters. A good way to make them longer, if that's what you want to do, would be to explain things more fully.
With Rose being bullied, I thought it was a nice touch to show that animosity in Hogwarts didn't just go away after Voldemort was killed. I liked that Rose stood up for her family.
I found some punctuation and grammar mistakes, but they weren't too bad.
Nice job!
Happy writing,
classicblack

Author's Response: I am deffeninty working on description with my new stories. Thanks for the reviews! :)

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