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Review:classicblack says:
Hey I'm here with your review!
It's a bit strange, Malfoy falling for Rose when they're 11/12, but I suppose that Ginny fell in love with Harry at that age. Maybe it isn't so strange?
I like how Draco is nice, but it seems a little off to have him rambling on about how Ravenclaw is the best House and being so pleasant and nice to Rose. I don't think he would have changed so much, Scorpius is more the changed Malfoy. But I do like that Astoria isn't the calm and collected and nice mother that many fics have portrayed her as. Sometimes she's the polar opposite of Draco and it was nice to see that you didn't do that.
Otherwise, I liked this chapter a lot and the fact that you're really moving the story along nicely, which is difficult to do in a short story without it being choppy.
Nice job overall.
Happy writing,
classicblack from the forums

Author's Response: I guess I just wanted Scorpius to have this strong bond, right off the bat. Thank's so much!

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