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Review:classicblack says:
I'm back with your review!
First off, let me say that I like how you gave two different perspectives on the Scorpius/Rose friendship- one from the Weasley house and one from Malfoy Manor. It added variety.
That being said, it feels as if you're treating Rose and Scorpius as people much older than they are. They're 11, in their first year of Hogwarts- or rather just finished it- and they wouldn't really be thinking about how beautiful the other is. And Rose's moral advice to Hugo was a bit... grown up? It doesn't feel like the kids story I think you meant it to be.
Otherwise, I really liked this chapter. I think that you've got a cute little fic here, especially for your first one.
Happy writing,
classicblack from the forums

Author's Response: Yes. One of my biggest regrets is the actual pacing of this entire story. I totally agree with everything your saying :)

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