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Review:classicblack says:
Hey I'm back with your review!
Although this chapter was short, I think it was very well done. I liked that you had Rose and Scorpius taking a tour of the castle together.
That being said, I was a bit confused throughout this chapter. In the beginning, it said Scorpius was a lanky teenager. He's eleven, so it was sort of odd. Also the switch from the prefect to the Head Boy was a little off.
It felt a bit strange to me that Rose and Scorpius didn't have at least a bit of a hatred towards one another at first. Afterall, their parents weren't particularly fond of each other and Ron even says in the epilogue of DH that Rose should stay away from Scorpius. Ah well, it's probably because I'm used to Rose/Scorpius bickering. Everyone has a different interpretation. I think your way is nice too.
Also, isn't it a bit too soon for them to think about the fact that the other is attractive? At this stage in my life, I was still thinking the boys I wasn't friends with had cooties.
The chapter felt a bit choppy, especially with some of the dialogue, but the general gist of it was very childlike and happy. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Well done
Happy writing,
classicblack from the forums

Author's Response: Uhg, I know this chapter was choppy. It's one of those things where your like, I don't know what to do...bah! kind of moments, you know? :) Thanks again for the review!

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