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Review:classicblack says:
Hello, it's classicblack from the forums with your review!
So far, I think you've got a great start to your story. You've really captured the innocence of eleven year olds, the nervousness of the first day of school, and how people would react to Rose's parentage. I wonder how Rose will react to Scorpius's parentage?
I like that Scorpius has some of his dad's pride and crassness, but that he's a bit softened, which allows him to become friends with Rose. I wonder if it'll be a bit like Severus and Lily except that they work out in the end.
It was also superb that you had them join together in Ravenclaw instead of having an inter-House relationship. Nice one!
I also like that the traditional Scorpius-Albus friendship wasn't the first thing that we were introduced to. It was nice that Rose and Scorp came first.
I must say, I laughed then Lorcan and Lysander called their mum looney. Looney Luna Lovegood, haha ;) It's a nice change to the usual Lorcan and Lysander who are just as barmy (yet awesome) as their mum.
I really liked that you began this with their first year, essentially picking up where JKR left off.
I found a couple grammar/ punctuation mistakes, but nothing too bad.
I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your story. So far, you've got a promising start.
Happy writing,
classicblack from the forums

Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate you reviewing all of these! I really enjoyed reading them all!!

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