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Review:Pixileanin says:
There was a lot of color in the first paragraph, which led up to the orange juice. Nice. I also adored the chapter title, which, when I got to the end, really hit home. There was definitely a shift here, both for Lucy and for Sirius. This is the first time you've let us see what Lucy is hiding from and how deeply it has affected her. And Sirius seems to have realized that perhaps it wasn't wholly Severus' fault for how Lucy turned out.

I love how you've woven the back story of Lucy and Severus' relationship into this story. We get to see little glimpses of what happened and why Lucy left, and that she still maintains Severus' integrity is warming.

Author's Response: I'm glad someone caught my double meaning in the chapter title :) This chapter definitely does represent a shift for both of them, and hopefully the next (and final) chapter will reveal just how large and important that shift really is.

I'm super happy to hear that the Snape/Lucy storyline didn't seem too forced. I wanted to emphasize that Lucy was really struggling between holding onto the past and being willing to embrace the future, and I also wanted to make sure that those readers who hadn't previously been exposed to that ship didn't feel too left out of the action :)

Thanks for all of your wonderful reviews, and I hope you enjoy the final chapter!

Amanda


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