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Review:ashling586 says:
You caught my attention right off the bat with the flashback scene, because I just had to know who is the one dying. It couldn't be your main character because I don't remember you ever mentioning her having a brother, so it has to be someone else, but who? I just have to keep reading now in order to figure out who it is. Then you throw the whole kiss on the neck at the end of the chapter and now I really have to keep reading in order to know what he says.
Good job, I thought the whole chapter was nice.

Author's Response: Hmm, the flashback scenes are one of my favourite parts to write and there's more in the next few chapters. No it's not Amorette at all I'm glad someone's got that ;) Haha, that's exactly what I planned to do when I wrote the kiss on the neck part :P

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