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Review:ashling586 says:
I really like the very beginning where the character is contemplating how to actually start the story. I thought it was cute and funny at the same time. You did a great job staying in first person and I thought you did a good job of introducing the readers to your character. My favorite part would have to be at the end when her mother was yelling at her from the window. It reminded me of a friend of mine's mother. I have always loved stories where the reader can relate what they are reading to something that has actually happened to them, it makes it more believable. Good job.

Author's Response: Aww thank you (: I'm glad you liked that bit at the start, after a while of having it up I thought it would turn people off continuing to read, but then I realised it's probably got something to do with the title :/ I'm glad that you could relate to that end bit, I love it when I can relate to stories too :D

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