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Review:fixed delusion says:
The thing I liked about this story is that the main character is not perfect , I mean far from it, but she is beginning to realizing her mistakes and may be this story is abt growing her up in a better person. Its not easy to forgive and forget what she has done and I think Rose is not going to forgive her that easily, u can never end up having sex if u don't want to, drunkenness is not an excuse. what I don't understand is , if malfoy wanted it to be a special moment then why he did he do it? He clearly doesn't care about Rose enough , hell he hasn' t even apolozised . Although I am a scorose fan , I don't expect any scorose in this fic.

Author's Response: Oh I'm glad you like her un-perfectness and the fact that she's learning from her mistakes and trying to grow up. I know exactly what you're saying about the forgive and forget thing and I used to agree with it until I saw people do that exact thing in the same circumstances, but there is no way Rose will forgive her until she proves herself to be a worthy friend. No you're right, drunkenness is not an excuse, but in that moment a little bit of herself that wasn't drunk told her it would be interesting to see what sex was like and the drunk part said: 'hey, if it's interesting, then why the hell shouldn't we do it?' The reason I decided Rose would still be a virgin was because I pictured her as a rather traditional girl who would never want to lose her virginity at a school or sneak around behind her father's back sometime in the holidays.

You see the thing about Scorpius is I have every thought he's thought since the whole revelation about Liv and him sleeping together, but I have no way to put it down on paper :/ In my mind he cares about Rose so much and now that he's seen how much he can hurt her he doesn't want that for her. He's cheated on her once and he knows he can do it again and he doesn't want a guy like that for the girl he loves. No, he hasn't apologised and that's because he knows that if he sees a chance that she might still love him he'll grasp on to it and never let go and he knows the longer he waits the more she hates him and the easier it'll be for him to give up on her... if that makes sense.

Haha, I'm glad you don't expect any scorose, because there won't be any (:

I feel like I'm just making up excuses for what you say, but honestly these are my thoughts and I really hate it that I can't seem to find the place to put all this information into the story.

Thank you so much for the review! It makes me think about everything all over again :D


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