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Review:javct says:
Javct45 here with your review!!

This is the first story that I've read from Ron's POV and I have to say that I loved it.
I think that you portrayed Ron's jealously really well and got across the emotion perfectly! Throughout the books we see Ron overshadowed by Harry and it is very interesting to read Ron's POV of Harry.

I didn't pick any grammatical errors or typos which was good. You did a really good job at telling a story in 500 words as well :)

Good luck with the challenges!!
*Jaz, 10/10

Author's Response: Hey, I'm so glad you enjoyed this story! :) I think that Ron's jealousy is an aspect of fic that gets overlooked a lot, and that's always sort of bothered me, because it's definitely prevalent in some of the canon books.

Thanks very much for leaving such a quick and lovely review! I really do appreciate it, and it means so much to me that you took the time to offer, too.


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