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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Hullo there! This is DarkRose from the forums, here with your reviews. :D

Well, let's start off with chapter one! And we'll begin with your author's note at the beginning. I usually have absolutely no reason to comment on these, but I thought you might want to know that you say that what is in bold will be in Arabic, but you really mean what's in italics. In case someone would get confused by that. :]

Moving on: I like the characterization of everyone. It's a good dichotomy that you have with Hiba's mother being uptight and her father being relaxed. I like that a lot. We'll see if it continues.

Hiba herself is quite consistent which I like. I can't decide how I feel about her yet, but she seems far out of Mary-Sue land, especially with the very unique and interesting fact that she's a Muslim. Intriguing. :] The one thing I might comment on concerning her religion: is it okay for her to use curse words? Like...there's nothing that religiously prevents that, right? I don't know, I'm just asking you. :]

REALLY cool making Hassan Mostafa her cousin. CANON CANON CANON! :D I love when authors work things like that in. Super cool.

We'll see how the rest of the story goes, but right now things seem to be progressing smoothly and interestingly. I like how this chapter went and I'll read the next one ASAP!

--Emily

Author's Response: Hello there!

Haha, yes I've noticed that, I will be editing it soon enough!

I'm glad you like the characterization of everyone! As for the curse-words, I think it's alright for them to use "some" words but not all like the bigger curse words that I can't mention here. But I don't think using curse words is a big sin for them (but however they can't constantly use them, especially, as I said before, the bigger and foul curse words), if that made any sense. :P

Thanks! I love how you noticed Hassan Mostafa is canon. :D

Thanks for the review!


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